Wow! What a review!

Wow! I have had a few reviews now, but this one really blew me away!!!

I don't know if Saranya will ever read this post (I hope she does!) but I just had to say THANK YOU! But since Saranya said so much more, I wanted to spend a bit more time replying as well.

I am SO happy that you picked up on the rawness of our protagonists. That means I accomplished what I set out to do! I wanted them to feel REAL. And real is often gritty. And yes, AI taking too many wrong turns into this future is the perfect way to describe it. In this specific case, AI created by a mad visionary!

On to the nitpicks though! I do COMPLETELY take on board that I need to slim down the jargon! TICK! Already on my list for book two! Some under-developed characters? I hear you! Some of them I just wanted to introduce you too now because believe me, they WILL come up again in later books! (hint hint!).